Saturday, January 27, 2007

Assignment for 3 February

In both classes on 3 February we will begin class by looking at an essay in the reader by Fred Strebeigh, "The Wheels of Freedom: Bicycles in China." This essay begins on Page 330 of the Norton Reader. I HOPE we will talk as a group about this essay, but at the very least, I shall present my analysis of the essay to give you an example of responding to a text.

The 8AM class will reconvene in the Library after the class break to attend a session with the reference librarian on using library resources to do research (note this session will be repeated for the 11Am class THE FOLLOWING SATURDAY, 10 February).

During the second hour of the 11AM class, we will look at grammar exercises, talk about writing resources, and talk about principles of writing clearly.

Friday, January 26, 2007

Regarding Essay #1

I want you all to review the essay you turned in on 20 January and submit it again. In particular, I want you to look carefully for formal problems such as fused sentences, comma splices, and sentence fragments. Do not, however, stop there: look for ways of expressing yourself more clearly and correctly; look for ways of making your work clearer, more fully stated and more formally correct.

I would prefer that you exchange papers with a class member, review each others' work, suggest changes and then, finally, review you own work, revise it and then turn it in. Some people don't have much to do on their papers, and some have a great deal to do. The point is this: I want you all to take another look at the paper you handed in on 20 January, proofread it carefully, revise it and then turn it in again to me by email. I will then grade the second copy you hand in, and I'll return it with the first copy, which I have graded and which I shall hold to return to you with the second copy. The grade I shall record will be the grade on the second copy.

I want you to complete this task so that you have submitted your second version of Essay #1 by the end of day on Tuesday, 30 January 2007. Again, please submit your revised essay to me by email, and please submit it by the end of the day on Tuesday. I shall make every effort to return the papers to you on Saturday, 3 February, but I may not be able to get them all done by then.

Thanks for your hard work, good luck in everything you do, and please let me know if you have any questions.

Exercise for Saturday, 27 January

For this class I want students to get into groups of three or, at the most, four. I don't want you to work in groups of two. Having grouped together, I want you to choose one of the readings you were assigned to read for today, discuss it, and then compose a group response. You may disagree with each other in your response, or you may focus in your response on talking about views you have in common about the piece you have chosen. Whatever approach you choose, you need to map out your response, compose it, revise it, and turn it in to me by the end of the class as printed copy. Please do not email me your final product for this exercise--please print it out. The printed copy should show the names of the people in your group, the title of the essay you chose, and the class title and section number. Your written response should be at least two full pages of text, formatted per the specifications on the course syllabus.

To get you started, I have some questions for you to consider:

What do you think Jacob Bronowski's intention was in writing "The Reach of Imagination"? Is he giving information, trying to change your mind about something, or trying to get you to behave differently? Does he talk about imagination in ways you find new? How does he employ the idea of seeing in his essay? Do you note anything about his choice of words that strikes you in any particular way? How do you feel as you read the essay? How do you feel after having read it? Did the essay have any effect on you, emotional or otherwise?

Concerning Amy Cunningham's "Why Women Smile," what would you say is the central point of the essay? Do you find anything ironic about the essay? Does the essay help you to see anything new about the idea of smiling? Do you think what Cunningham says applies mostly to women, or could any of it apply equally to men? Does the essay make you think at all about how you--or anyone you frequently deal with--use smiling as a coping strategy in your daily life? Did the essay surprise you in any way? Is there anything about what Cunningham chooses not to say on this subject that strikes you in any particular way? What overall effect did the essay have on you: did you feel a certain way, did you find yourself thinking about something in particular, or was there anything else you noticed about your own awareness after you read this essay?

Friday, January 19, 2007

Resources for Improving Sentence Structure

To help people who need guidance improving their sentence structure, I have found a number of online resources aimed at making you more able to revise your prose into solid, standard, formal English. Here are the resources I have gathered:


The University of Guelph Sentence Structure Guide

University of Houston Writing Center Grammar Guide


The KSU Writing Center Guide to Grammar


The University of Houston Guide includes a link to a multimedia presentation that walks you step-by-step through recognizing and editing improperly structured sentences. The KSU guide includes exercises designed to help you recognize and edit incorrect sentences. All of these resources reflect the best practices in academic and non-academic professional writing. Please know this: it is critical to your advancement in the career world that you master proper, grammatically correct English.

Thursday, January 18, 2007

Reading Assignment for 27 January

On 28 January we will spend time discussing two readings from your text:

"The Reach of Imagination" by Jacob Bronowski (P. 210) and
"Why Women Smile" by Amy Cunningham (P. 261).

In addition to covering the readings, I shall give you a writing exercise in class, and the exercise will be due by the end of the class period.

Review of Assignment for 20 January

Again, on 20 January we will spend the first hour talking about writing, and the second hour you will have to finish your first major essay. The essay is due to be turned in by the end of class. You should be prepared to print the essay as hardcopy to submit to me--please DO NOT send me your essay by email. The essay you turn in on 20 January is to be based on any reading you find in the Norton Reader. Your essay should be written as a response to the reading you have chosen, and it is to be between three and five pages long, formatted as per the requirements set forth in the course syllabus.

Saturday, January 13, 2007

Assignment for 20 January

There is no reading assignment for this day. Here's what we will do on 20 January:

We begin by talking about what I mean by clear writing;

continue by reviewing what is meant by "Toulmin" argument structure; and

conclude by talking about some common mistakes people make in writing and how to avoid them.

This will bring us to the end of the first hour.

The second hour or so, you will have time to finish work on your first essay, which is due at the END OF THE CLASS PERIOD. You should spend time before class crafting a draft of the essay you want to hand in on 20 January, so that what you bring to class is ready for final editing. During the writing portion of the class, you'll have time to exchange drafts with your peers, talk with me (pending my availability) about what you have, and finish up your work to hand in to me, again, at the end of the class.

First In-Class Response

This exercise is due by end of day today, January 13. You may e-mail it to me at my gmail account. If you mail me your work, be sure to mail it as a Word attachment.

Choose either Hurston's piece, "What it means to be colored me" or Eiseley's piece, "The Brown Wasps," and write an essay that begins by saying what you think the piece is about, followed by whatever reaction you think or feel is most appropriate to what you find in the piece. Your response should be at least two full pages of text, conforming with the formatting standards set forth in the class syllabus. Email me or call me with any questions, or post a comment to this blog posting and I'll respond to you.

Friday, January 05, 2007

Link to Mary Oliver poem

Click HERE to go to an online copy of the poem "Wild Geese" by Mary Oliver.

Writing Clearly Overview

Clear writing is:

Knowledgeable

Well-researched—uses peer-reviewed, current sources
Accurate—careful about facts
Felicitous—appropriate to the occasion, audience-aware

Correct

Verb-subject agreement
Grammatically correct sentences
Spelling
Punctuation
Word choice

Concise

Free of unneeded words

Good Storytelling


Beginning, middle, end

Agents and Actions


Helps you understand who is doing what

Cohesive

Sentences flow from one to another

Coherent

Topics in a passage relate to each other readily

Tuesday, January 02, 2007

English 1102 Syllabus

Syllabus

English 1102

Dr. Michael Saunders
Spring 2007 Semester

Instructor Contact Information

Dr. Michael Saunders
E-Mail: srfntrf@gmail.com
Office Hours: Saturdays by appointment, 1:45 to 3PM
Telephone: 404-234-5866

Required Texts:

Any grammar/usage/research handbook commonly used in sections of English 1101 at Kennesaw State University (e.g., St. Martins Handbook).

Peterson, Linda H., and Brereton, John C., eds. The Norton Reader: An Anthology of Nonfiction. 11th Edition. New York: W. W. Norton and Company, 2004.

Course Description:


English 1102 focuses on reading across the college curriculum and preparing the student for complex research projects. Conceived most centrally as a writing course, English 1102 engages the student to perform a good number of writing exercises. Students in this course should be prepared to write during every class section. They should also be prepared to budget time to do a significant amount of writing outside of class, as the course requires them to complete a significant research paper. As a natural consequence of working on in-class writing and out-of-class research projects, students should expect, furthermore, to do a good amount of reading. English 1102 is designed to be a course that challenges students to prepare for the rigors of upper-division academic research and, beyond that, of professional writing and research.

Course Requirements


In-class responses to assigned readings: 10% of final grade
1st Essay, due 20 January, 10% of final grade
2nd Essay, due 17 February, 20% of final grade
3rd Essay, due 24 March, 20% of final grade
Final research paper, due 28 April 2007: 30% of final grade
Final Exam Essay, date TBA, 10% of final grade
In-class reading responses are to be at least two pages, topics to be assigned by the instructor.

Essays are to be 3 to 5 pages, long, formatted as specified here below. Topics to be assigned by the instructor.

The research paper is to be 5 to 8 pages long, formatted as specified here below. Topics to be assigned by the instructor.


Grading Scale

A=90 to 100
B=80 to 89
C=70 to 79
D=60 to 69
F=59 or below

Concerning Grades:

You should expect the work you do for this course to be evaluated with the same level of scrutiny you would find in any professional workplace. I intend to teach you with the highest reasonable standards of performance in mind, because this is what you need to succeed in your work life. My inten-tion is to be fair and also rigorous as I evaluate your work. Here is how I grade your work:

A: The work is superior in composition, thought development, grammar, word usage and spelling correctness, and style. An A is the result of originality of thought, depth of understanding, and outstanding style as well as excellence in grammar and development.

B: The work is a paper in which the material has been presented in an above-average manner with a minimum number of errors of any kind.

C: This is average work; it is the grade most papers receive. There is a clear and adequately developed thesis, and most serious grammatical errors are lacking; however, the C paper lacks the vigor of thought, development, and expression required for a higher grade.

D: Please take special note of this statement: A grade of ‘D’ denotes below-average, unsatisfactory work. A paper with errors in subject-verb agreement, comma splices or fused sentences, sentence fragments, illogical sentences, or numerous spelling errors will not be awarded a grade higher than this.

F: Unacceptable writing at the university level.

Attendance


All students are expected to attend classes. Roll will be taken at the beginning of each class. If you do not answer appropriately when I call roll (a simple “Here” spoken audibly will do), I shall count you as absent. Because this class meets only once a week, a student who misses more than two class sessions will be de-moted by one letter grade for the course, with an additional letter grade drop for each additional absence. If a student comes into class after the roll is taken, the student will be counted as tardy. Two incidents of tardiness count as one absence. If you leave class early without my consent, you will be counted as absent for that session.
Failing to attend class does not exempt you from class readings. If you miss class, it’s up to you to find out what you missed and complete any tasks assigned while you were away. If you have a job or other outside obligation that will interfere with your taking this class and/or with attending sufficiently as specified in this syllabus, please understand that while I sympathize with such conflicts, I can’t and won’t grant any special treatment to accommodate such schedule conflicts.


Unauthorized use of the Internet, Cell Phones, SmartPhones, Blackberrys, PDAs and Other Personal Communications Devices


Use of cell phones or other communications devices in the classroom (including text messaging devices or computer functions other than e-mail or other computer applications directly associated with assigned class work) is expressly prohibited. This will include use of such personal web communications forums such as MySpace, FaceBook, MSN, and the like. My rule here boils down to this: you may not use class time to perform a communication that is not immediately relevant to class work as defined by me. Violation of this policy will be treated as a breach of class discipline, in accordance with discipline policies set forth in the Kennesaw State University student handbook. Mute or power off any personal communications devices while in class, and do not use them in the classroom. If you cannot abide by this rule, please drop the course.


Accommodations for Students with Disabilities


If you have a disability that may require assistance or accommodations, please speak with me as soon as possible, and contact Disabled Student Services at 770-423-6443.


Academic Integrity Statement


Every KSU student is responsible for upholding the provisions of the Student Code of Conduct, as published in the Undergraduate and Graduate Catalogs. Section II of the Student Code of Conduct addresses the University’s policy on academic honesty, including provisions regarding plagiarism and cheating, unauthorized access to University materials, misrepresentation or falsification of University records or academic work, malicious removal, retention, or destruction of library materials, malicious/intentional misuse of computer facilities and/or services, and misuse of student identification cards. Incidents of alleged academic misconduct will be handled through the established procedures of the University Judiciary Program, which includes either an “informal” resolution by a faculty member, resulting in a grade adjustment, or a formal hearing procedure, which may subject a student to the Code of Conduct’s minimum on semester suspension requirement.

Plagiarism


Using another’s work as your own is wrong and will result in your failing the course. Be sure that you have carefully and accurately given credit through documentation when you have borrowed words or ideas. We will practice strategies for avoiding plagiarism in class. If you do, however, submit the work of another student or essays/information found on the Internet as your own, you will automatically fail the course.

What You Need with You in Class

Each time you come to class, bring your text book, something to write with, something to write on (for making notes), and a portable electronic storage medium such as a USB flash drive, re-writable CD, or floppy drive. Losing your work because you didn’t save it does not excuse you from turning in your work on time. You also need to bring with you a KSU ID card with funds loaded onto it so that you can print documents in our classroom.

Particulars Regarding Assignments


Reading Responses

Reading responses are in-class essays I shall assign in conjunction with class readings. They should be at least two typed pages in length. They are to be handed in at the end of the class session in which they are performed. They should be formatted using standard formatting, specified here below.

Essays

Essays are to be three to five pages in length. They are to be written as reactions to a reading from the class text. They can incorporate material from sources outside the class text, but they must be framed as reactions to readings found in the class text, the Norton Reader.

Research Papers

Research papers are to be formatted as specified here below. They are to be written on a topic that treats at least one reading from the class text and that employs at least five outside sources, no more than two of which may be chosen from internet resources. Research papers will employ standards of academic citation conforming to either MLA, APA or Chicago Manual of Style. They are to be between five and eight typed pages. In addition to handing in the final versions of the papers, students will be required to hand in, at dates to be as-signed by the instructor, a draft of the research paper.



Standard Formatting For Class Work


All class work is to be prepared as typed text on 8.5” x 11” paper using Times New Roman 12-point font, with one-inch margins on all sides and double-spaced text. Paragraphs may be formatted to have a first-line indent, not to exceed 0.25 inches. The student’s name, the class title and the exercise title should appear in the header (not the body) of the first page, and the page number should not appear on the first page. On pages succeeding the first page, the student’s last name and the page number should appear in the upper right-hand corner of the heading. Any work not conforming to these specifications will be awarded a grade of zero (0).

Note that as the English Department computers in our classroom use Microsoft Word, if you work with another word processing program outside of class, it is your responsibility to prepare works-in-progress so they can be read on class computers. If you work with an open-source word processor, it is generally safest to save your work as an .rtf file to permit you to work on it in MS Word.


Important Class Dates


• 20 January—First Essay
• 17 February—Second Essay
• 2 March: last day to drop without academic penalty
• March 3 through 9: Spring Break—no classes
• 24 March—Third Essay
• 28 April—Final Paper (Research Paper)


Disclaimer

Note that all provisions of this syllabus are subject to revision by the instructor. It is each student’s individual responsibility to stay up-to-date on all requirements for completing this section of English 1102 satisfactorily.